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1. Palak.thewish Says:
   August 18th, 2008 at 9:50 am

   Again i m the first one who got the chance to submitt something ish is related to Love… so i think i m lucky..

   Ehsaas

   Kisi ko nazar bhar dekhne ka
   kisi ko khwabon mei niharne ka
   kisi ko chhune ka
   kisi se do pal baat karne ka
   EHSAAS hai ARMAANO ka

   kisi ko dil mein rakhne ka
   kisi ke sparsh ko pane ka
   kisi ke humsafar banne ka
   kisi per aitbaar karne ka
   EHSAAS hai PYAAR ka

   kisi ko khoon se sinchne ka
   kisi ko loriyaan sunane ka
   kisi se MAA kehalwane ka
   kisi per matritva lutane ka
   EHSAAS hai MAMTA ka, ek MAA ka

   kisi per naraaz hone ka
   kisi per roothne ka
   kisi se bewajah shikayat karne ka
   kisi ke naazon ko uthane ka
   EHSAAS hai ABHIMAAN ka

   kisi ke saamne na jhukne ka
   apne nischay per atal rehne ka
   hamesha sachhai ke saath dene ka
   apne usulon ko aham samajhne ka
   EHSAAS hai SWABHIMAAN ka

   kisi ke saath simtnay ka

   kisi ka ho jane ka
   kisi per apnay aap ko samrpit karnay ka
   EHSAAS hai ek PATNI ka

   kabhi pyaar, kabhi krodh, kabhi prem, kabhi shodh
   kabhi naraazgi per lagata avrodh
   kabhi mamta, kabhi dridhta, kabhi mithya, kabhi saatvikta,
   hai AAKASH sa phaila chadar, ek shabd EHSAAS ka.

   *****PALAK*****

2. suhasmahajan85 Says:
   August 18th, 2008 at 2:42 pm

   HI palak nice really nice poem
   keep it up…

3. suhasmahajan85 Says:
   August 20th, 2008 at 8:51 am

   hi,
   palak mene koshish ki ke marathi me se hindi convert karu but wo maja nahi aayega jo marathi me he ,
   So I requiest you, instead of conversion try to learn MARATHI coz once I can convert but u cant feel the meaning of poem thats why.
   bye tc

4. Palak.thewish Says:
   August 21st, 2008 at 9:03 am

   Hi..
   Yes i will try to learn Marathi but this a matter of time.. itna jaldi nahi learn kar paugi but yes off course i will..

   Bye .. TC

5. dr.jigisha nanavati Says:
   February 1st, 2009 at 3:25 pm

   hi palak,
   ur poem has really touched me. very good . do keep on writing such a beautiful thoughts.

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